How's My Driving?

Hello everyone! A bit rusty, but happy to be playing Bethany.

How am I doing? Do I need to improve on certain points? Is there a different way I should be writing her speech or thoughts? Please let me know here! Constructive criticism is much appreciated always! Please don't be rude. Polite comments are the way to get the improvement you'd like to see.

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